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Message 218:

Date:     Sat Jan 15 14:04:13 2000 CST
From:     Pixor (#2375)
To:       *bugs (#805)
Subject:  ruguer

'Shirtless, a stream of sweat slides down his hairless chest.' this is a dangling participle
 phrase, it implies that the stream of sweat is 'shirtless'. it should be made clear in the
 sentence that 'shirtless' refers to ruguer. for example: 'shirtless, he looks like a female
 model'. you get the picture.